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NLocc-3Salvation Army OfficerWhenever, at the start of a round before phase 1, another player has no Food markers, you may give them 1 Food from your personal supply. If you do this, you receive your choice of 1 Grain, 1 Wood, 1 Clay, 1 Reed, or 1 Sheep from the general supply.0uwe
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2010-12-02 22:03:09
by mazarin


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Salvation Army Officer (occ-3+)
Whenever, at the start of a round before phase 1, another player has no Food markers, you may give them 1 Food from your personal supply. If you do this, you receive your choice of 1 Grain, 1 Wood, 1 Clay, 1 Reed, or 1 Sheep from the general supply.

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.uwe
Oct 30, 2010 11:51am
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(Edit: May 28, 2011 12:22pm)
   TRANSLATION DISCUSSION BEGINS.
Offizierin der Heilsarmee:
Immer wenn zu Beginn einer Runde, noch vor Phase 1, ein Mitspieler von dir gar keine Nahrwertmarken hat, kannst du ihm 1 NW aus deinem Vorrat geben. Als Anerkennung fur deine Wohltat kannst du dir dann jeweils entweder
1 Getreide, 1 Holz, 1 Lehm, 1 Schilf oder 1 Schaf aus dem allgemeinen Vorrat aussuchen.
chris
Oct 30, 2010 11:51am
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German speaker, did i translate the name correct? chris
Oct 30, 2010 11:52am
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Yes (except for the spelling error: "officer"). The name refers to Major Bosshardt. pijll
Oct 31, 2010 3:45am
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(Edit: Oct 31, 2010 3:45am)
The first sentence should end with "give them 1 Food from your personal supply" i think. zlorfik
Oct 31, 2010 4:27am
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(Edit: Nov 1, 2010 3:34am)
   TRANSLATION DISCUSSION ENDS. GENERAL DISCUSSION BEGINS.
Is there any reason not to just call this " Salvation Army Officer" ?

Also, you may be able to lose a few commas in the first sentence:
Whenever another player has no Food at the start of a round before phase 1, you may give them 1 Food from your personal supply. In recognition of your kindness you receive your choice of 1 Grain, 1 Wood, 1 Clay, 1 Reed, or 1 Sheep from the general supply.

I think if you read it out loud its a bit tighter. But no big deal
mazarin
Nov 24, 2010 8:28pm
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I like that name better; thanks; UPDATED. I'll think about your text. In general, i try to establish time before benefit. In this case time="Whenever, at the start of a round before phase 1" chris
Nov 24, 2010 10:18pm
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Try this:

"At the start of a round before phase 1, if another player has no Food, you may give them 1 Food from your personal supply. In recognition of your kindness, you receive your choice of 1 Grain, 1 Wood, 1 Clay, 1 Reed, or 1 Sheep from the general supply."

shortens it by about 7 characters; Gets rid of the split phrase ( Whenever... another)
mazarin
Nov 25, 2010 7:08pm
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If 2 people have no Food, can you give both 1 Food and receive 2 benefits? chris
Dec 2, 2010 11:53am
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Quote from: chris on Dec 2, 2010 11:53am
If 2 people have no Food, can you give both 1 Food and receive 2 benefits?

The current text does not prevent that
btizo
Dec 2, 2010 12:04pm
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