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You receive 2 Food before you pay the costs of playing this Occupation. In the Returning home phase of each Round, you must choose 1 player among those who built or played a new card that round. That player receives 1 Food from the general supply. (You may choose yourself if possible.) [View playtest games] [View all dealt games] |
Prolific Writer (occ-3+)Oct 30, 2010 12:37pm [quote] (Edit: Nov 1, 2010 7:37pm) |
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TRANSLATION DISCUSSION BEGINS. | ||
Vielschreiber: Du erhaltst sofort 2 NW, die mit den Kosten der Ausbildung verrechnet werden konnen. In der Heimkehrphase einer jeden Runde musst du unter allen Spielern, die in der laufenden Runde eine neue Karte erworben bzw. ausgespielt haben, einen Spieler aussuchen, der 1 NW aus dem allgemeinen Vorrat erhalt. (Gunstigenfalls wahlst du naturlich dich selbst aus.) |
Oct 30, 2010 12:37pm [quote] |
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"You may choose yourself if possible." Your translation seems to suggest that you can always choose yourself, but of course you can only do that if you're eligible. |
Oct 31, 2010 3:23am [quote] |
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I think we agreed that major improvements are "build", not "acquired". Also it needs to be general supply, not just supply. And i think we should use the same verb twice, not select in 1 sentence and choose in the other. So: You receive 2 Food before you pay the costs of playing this Occupation. In the Returning home phase of each Round, you must choose 1 player among those who built or played a new card that round. That player receives 1 Food from the general supply. (You may choose yourself if possible.) |
Oct 31, 2010 1:26pm [quote] (Edit: Nov 1, 2010 3:45am) |
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TRANSLATION DISCUSSION ENDS. GENERAL DISCUSSION BEGINS. | ||
This is sort-of similar to Foreman. Pretty strong in a high-card strategy. | Nov 12, 2010 3:39pm [quote] |
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Suggested reworking: In the Returning home phase of each Round, you receive 1 Food from the general supply if you built or played a new card this round. |
This card is mainly designed to reward you for playing a minor or occ every turn and penalize you slightly when you fail to do so. Perhaps some requirement to distribute the food as evenly as possible when possible. (or just eliminate the additional text- the reward only applies to you (and we eliminate the initial food reward.)Dec 1, 2010 4:34pm [quote] |
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